Conquer Your Love
D.N.F. - I am def. in the minority with this series. I made it about half way through this book and just couldn't finish it. The number of inconsistencies from the first book, things like names which really should be double checked and I've listed below, was atrocious and I was surprised to see that this had been professionally edited because there were errors on every page.
Besides that, I had several other problems with the story but mainly I just could not connect with the characters or care about their story enough to continue. I never felt any real connection between Jett and Brooke, just surface feelings. Nothing deep and no reasoning behind their 'love.'
The plot and dialog was incredibly choppy as well, jumping from one thought or perspective to the next with each new sentence. And Brooke's supposed best friend, Sylvie, was just horrific. I don't think I've ever read a character, including evil villains, that I disliked as much as her.
The whole book just fell flat for me and I've tried really hard to find something that I liked in it but unfortunately, I can't. :(
Inconsistencies:
Surrender Your Love - Conquer Your Love
Jett's car model: Ferrari - Lamborghini
Brooke's ex name: Sean McDermott - Cameron
Lawyer's name: Jake Clarkson - Ken Clarkson
